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2019年5月4日雅思大小作文点评及范文解析

2019-05-07编辑: 长安来自: 环球教育

  苏州环球教育郭孝伟老师为大家带来2019年5月4日雅思大小作文的点评及范文解析。

  A类小作文

  [作文类型] 线状图

  [作文题目] The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

  [作文图片]


  [综合点评] 此类趋势图建议按照线条描述对象分别阐述,注意每个曲线的最高点和最低点以及总体趋势。建议一段总体讲述澳大利亚加拿大欧盟小麦出口在1985到1990的总趋势,二段描述澳加拿大和欧盟,注意欧盟小麦出口超过澳大利亚的时间段。末尾段面熟澳大利亚的小麦出口下降趋势

  A类大作文

  [作文题目] Some people consider that is of little of no use to us. Others believe that studying history help us to know the present. Discuss these views and give your opinions.

  [题目分析] 双方观点类作文,讨论两边观点并给出个人观点

  [题材类别] 教育类

  [思路分析] 论点在于讨论学习历史有无用处,此类作文建议不要一刀切,而是分别论述双方观点的合理之处,如学习历史无用可以从个人就业和经济发展方面论证,而论证历史对现在的认知作用可以从文化和民族角度论证,最后个人观点有一定倾向但不要绝对化。

  【参考范文】

  whether studying history is useful or not has formed a debatable issue. Personally, I tend to hold that the study of history is an indispensable part in our educational system.

  Having a command of historical knowledge, in somebody's views, is not practical. After all, as a subject consisting of various records of our ancestors, history is too abstract and theoretical for personal career prospect and the development of our country. As for students who are not majored in history, devoting enormous time and energy to delving into history could not ensure that they could obtain a decent job after graduation, since the talent needed by enterprises should be armed with one or several practical skills so that they could be competent for their positions and generate profit for their corporations. What's more, it is the advancement of scientific technology, instead of stories in history, lay the foundation of the prosperity of economy.

  However, opposite arguments that history enable people to comprehend our current life from culture to nation are also convincing. firstly, without relevant historical knowledge, most festivals will lose its cultural origins and most customs also lack its meaning. As a result, only forms and styles remained and profound and extensive culture will become arid desert one day. Secondly, history prompt citizens to form the consensus of their nations. For instance, through imparting the brilliant and long history of China to students, teachers establish the concept of nation in students' mind and all efforts and devotions from our ancestors to boost our country will be engraved in their memory, which trigger their love for their motherland.

  Overall, even though studying history seems futile in terms of personal earning and the economic boom, it help citizens conserve their culture and locate their identity in this world, which is , in my opinion, is more essential in modern society.


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