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2019年雅思写作考试权威点评

2019-04-04

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A类小作文

【作文类型】本次考试小作文为柱形图,图表信息直观简洁,讲述的是在不同时间段旅游景点的人数变化,原题图表如下:

【作文题目】The bar chart shows the changes in the number of visitors exploring different scenic spots inn 1981, 1991 and 2001.


【综合点评】.

   这道题目因为老师也没有纵轴上的具体数字,所以在此和大家简单分析下图表的变化趋势。

   我们能够看到在1981年的时候,central amusement park是参观量最大的经典,其他几个景点人数连这个景点的人数的一半都不到。

   到了1991年,central amusement park的参观人数明显减少,而相比之下,national park以及national gallery的参观人数比较明显增长涨幅50%左右分别。science park的参观人数虽然也在上升,但是变化并不是很大。

   而到了2001年,不难发现central amusement park的参观量有所回升,而national park以及national gallery的参观人数持续增长,已经逐渐接近central amusement park的体量。science park以及central zoo的参观人数还是相对稳定没有大幅变化,在这20年内保持比较稳定水平。

 A类大作文

【作文题目】

In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants.What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?

【题目分析】

而大作文方面我们这次是一道report结构的方案题, 这个题目的题干还是比较简单,几乎没有任何难词,不容易出现理解错误,第一个问题让我解答浪费食物的原因,第二问题让我们提出有效的解决方案,针对这类题,老师一直建议大家分别写出两个原因和对应的方案就可以了,这样的观点分配就能保证大家把字数达成,我们来一起写下这篇文章:

【题材类别】Report

【参考范文】

People nowadays have a high material standard of living, which is a good embodiment of social development. Meanwhile, an innumerable amount of food brought from stores or restaurants has been wasted and there is no doubt that this is not a positive side we expect in the consumption life. From my point, there are mainly two reasons that lead to such a large-scale food waste.

First of all, people have no ideas on how to conserve food they buy and all the excessively consumed food is thrown away when it has gone bad. As we all know, most food sold in the shops or restaurants has a certain quality guarantee period and when people cannot finish eating what they buy and forget to put them into fridges, discarding the overdue food seems to be the only option. For example, parents like to buy cartons of milks in one single shopping,especially when there is selling promotion in dairy products. And after several summer days, the ones that went sour are dumped into bins.

also, people tend to over-consume and buy too much food they do not even like. Sometimes, people consume for fun or simply want to try something they never experienced. They are told what to buy from the advises on social media websites, but when they finally tasted the food personally, they decide to not like them and see the food waste as affordable loss. For example, many bloggers would post all the worthy-trying dishes on their website attracting young people who have consumption powder to buy, which in fact, are not as good as they expect.

Therefore, as consumers, people should have an awareness of cherishing food, for that food is also a limited form of social resource. People shall learn to consume according to their real need, buying food for eating instead of for wasting. And the truth is there is still food shortage in some regions in the world, so food waste is not a positive act to be encouraged. (333)


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