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2019年5月11日雅思大小作文点评及范文解析

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  苏州环球教育王歆琪老师为大家带来2019年5月11日雅思大小作文的点评及范文解析,希望对考生们有所帮助~


  A类小作文

  【作文类型】饼图

  【作文题目】The pie chart below shows the percentage of exports from three countries(Argentina, Chili and Mexico) to four different regions in 2004.

  【综合点评】本次小作文考察是是静态饼图,相对比较简单。静态图的重点在于数量和对比。注意饼图中占比和排名的表达,例如occupy/account for/take up/constitute/highest/biggest/prominent/leading/dominant/followed by/the second;-est/lowest/smallest/

  A类大作文

  【作文题目】Most of world's problem are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  【题目分析】同意与否类别

  【题材类别】社会类

  【思路分析】人口问题是雅思写作的常见话题,注意题目中的"most"表示"大多数",讨论时需要针对"most"进行论述。

  Intro:背景知识+引入话题+个人观点

  Body1:承认人口过多能引发部分问题

  Body2:阐明引发世界问题的其他因素

  Conclusion:总结+重申观点

  Over-population, which has been a frequently debated topic, is considered to result in many problems in the world. However, I would not agree that excessive population is responsible for most of the worldwide problems.

  It is acknowledged that the overgrowth of population presents a threat to the environment. Deforestation and land clearing, as major solutions to feed a larger population, result in the increase of global temperature and the decrease of soil productivity. More population means more consumption of fuels, releasing a large amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Urban life is also threatened as an increasing number of people compete for limited resources. House crowding, traffic congestion and unemployment are not uncommon for people living in cities.

  However, it is not fair to blame over-population for most of the problems. War, causing tremendous losses and untold suffering, is driven by a series of factors such as politics, religion and economics. Another example is poverty, which has been a concern attached with much importance. In fact, some underdeveloped countries such as Nepal and North Korea are not over-populated. On the contrary, shortage of young and middle-aged labor makes the countries uncompetitive in terms of human resources, restraining economic growth as a result. Crime is also not directly related to over-population but factors various from person to person, such as lack of communication, pursuit of money and revenge mentality.

  In conclusion, over-population is undoubtfully associated with some problems such as deterioration of the natural environment and low quality of life, but there are other factors that should not be neglected when worldwide problems are discussed.


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