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2019年4月13日雅思大小作文点评及范文解析

2019-04-28编辑: 长安来自: 环球教育

  苏州环球教育王梦楚老师为大家带来2019年4月6日雅思大小作文的点评及范文解析。


  A类小作文

  【作文类型】柱状图

  【作文题目】The bar chart shows the changes in the number of students applying for four different kinds of subjects in a UK university in 2008 and 2013, and the predicted figure in 2025.

  【综合点评】本次柱状图参考剑桥5 test 1 含有将来是的线图,剑桥9Test 3的柱状图。注意总结和概括主要特征,并且辅以数据的相应支撑。主语数据表达的多样方法,以及题干中apply for / different kinds of subjects 的词汇多样性替代。

  【参考范文】

  A类大作文

  【作文题目】Some people believe that famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws attention to the problems, while others think celebrities make the prob-lems less important.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(2015-03-21原题)

  【题目分析】观点类作文。这次作文系旧题重考,与2015年3月21号大陆考区A类作文题目一致。考察内容比较容易偏题, 注意从概括到具体的铺设和因果逻辑关系的展开。

  【题材类别】双边讨论类

  Nowadays, more and more celebrities prefer taking part in charity works, which has trig-gered a hot debate regarding whether it draws the public's attention to the problem or not. In my view, international aid organizations can attract more people' s attention on problems if these famous people give the right assistance and set up good images.

  Some believe that the international aid organizations can take advantage of the appeal of celebrities. It is undeniable that campaigns of the international charity groups which are promoted by the public figures, such as politicians, famous singers, movie stars and top athletes, can arouse widespread concern from ordinary people. For example, an interna-tional philanthropic foundation advocated by a famous artist has received millions of dona-tion from her fans, with those money thousands children suffering from a certain disease in the world regain a new life.

  However, others argue that, celebrities have brought little help to the charity organizations. To begin with, most of the time, the citizens only pay attention to those who live under spot-light, but Ignore the undertaking they are promoting. Moreover, some public figures just seek exposure and reputation in the name of charity, some even were criticized for fraud donation, which ruins people's trust in these organizations, not to mention saving the prob-lems.

  In conclusion, I think that, although sometimes the celebrity effect in the international aid is easy to be doubted, we have to admit that the public figures with positive image can attract more resources and enhance the reputation of those organizations, which can further bene-fit more people in return.


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