苏州环球教育高瑾老师为大家带来2019年3月23日雅思大小作文的点评及范文解析。

　　A类小作文

　　【作文类型】流程图（下图为参考）

　　【作文题目】旧题重现

　　【综合点评】作为三月份的最后一场考试，终于出现了流程图。今年的小作文考试整体出题比较平稳，没有特别的难题，这次的小作文也是旧题重现，流程图需要大家仔细审题，作文里要涵盖图中的所有内容，常见的动词表达也需要在考前能够及时准备。

　　【参考范文】

　　The diagram shows the process of canning fresh fruit.

　　First the fruit is picked from trees by hand. It is then transported to the cannery by large trucks. At the cannery the fruit is washed and quality checked, and any poor quality fruit is rejected. The good quality fruit is put into cold storage. When it is ready for canning, the fruit is weighed and graded. The grading ensures that fruit of a similar size is kept together. After this the fruit is peeled and the cores are removed. It is then sliced into the required sizes and put into cans. Juice or syrup is also added to the cans. Once the cans have been filled, they are sealed and cooked over heat to ensure that the cans are sterilized. When the cans are cool, labels are attached and they are placed into storages. The canned fruit is now ready to be dispatched to supermarkets and sold.

　　A类大作文

　　【作文题目】Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　【题目分析】观点类作文。这次作文的内容也是比较生活化的，讨论老师和家长对于孩子的影响。但是在这个题目中需要注意的是，题干也出现了并列结构，需要讨论对于孩子intellectual和social这两个方面的影响，学生作文的时候需要注意到这个修饰语。同时题干也是个对比结构，学生需要有明确的态度。

　　【题材类别】教育类

　　【参考范文】

　　While some people argue that teachers play a greater role in the social development of children, I tend to hold a different viewpoint.

　　It is true that teachers have major influence on children since the schooling takes up a large proportion of their lives. Once children go to school, they are entering a wider community where they will experience studying and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to cooperate with each other, and how to contribute to the life of their community. Besides, at school, children have access to different academic subjects which equipped them with a wide range of information and knowledge.

　　The role of parents is equally, if not more, important. Parents are the first people that you come into contact with. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly play a major part in helping children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. At home, parents could read or tell stories to children, which molds children into becoming readers, and this significantly increase children's potential for academic success as well as lifelong success in general. Children are more likely to have a better command of language in an early age by learning the pronunciation and vocabulary from parents. It also builds listening skills, increase a child's attention span, and develops the ability to concentrate.

　　To conclude, I believe that parents and teachers are equally responsible for the process and success of children.