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雅思写作自我提升之语法重点

2015-10-23

来源:环球教育整理

小编:xiaohe 93
摘要:在能顺利完成雅思作文之后,如何润色自己的作文是很多同学想要弄清楚的问题。从语法上着手,本文就具体细节总结给大家。

  雅思写作的语法上要多注意修饰。这里不仅是指避免语法错误,更进一步主要的是追求更优质的表达。如何在现有基础上转变呢?下面就介绍具体的方法:

  一.尽量运用主动语态。之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。

  例如:

  1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.

  Better: Charity has supported the organization.

  2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

  Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

  二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。

  例如:

  1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.

  Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

  2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.

  Better: She compares prices and quality.

  三、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单,生动。

  例如:

  1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

  Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

  2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

  Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

  3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

  Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

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