一．漏用逻辑连接词：

如：1.Home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those with childcare responsibilities could arrange their schedule flexibly.2. Working at home ensures employers’ multiple options in human resource.

稍做理解就不难发现，句1和句2其实是并列或递进关系，原文略松散，不妨可以用相应的逻辑连接词（and, in addition, what is more）来串联,让行文更流畅，凸显两句相应的地位，以区别中间的举例部分，修改后：

To begin with, home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those with childcare responsibilities could arrange their schedule flexibly. What is more, working at home ensures employers’ multiple options in human resource.

二．错用逻辑连接词

如：One hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease.2. Nevertheless, these who are disabled can avoid many difficulties.

句1和句2的逻辑连接词用错。首先，从语法形式上来说，逻辑连接词通常包括连词，副词，介词，介词短语等.句1的 “One hand”只是一个名词短语，不可能充当连接手段，应改为正确的介词短语形式“on one hand”,相对应的逻辑连接词是 “on the other hand”，可这个连接手段却经常被中国学生用错，想当然的将这两个短语翻译为“一方面…，而另一方面…”, 所以有学生会把句2的“nevertheless”改成“on the other hand”，又会被扣分，因为这两个搭配使用的短语正确用法应该是连接两个意思相反或相对立的句子，比如：

On one hand， home-working enables employees to work at ease. On the other hand, employees may be confronted with some problems brought by home-working.

而句1和句2并不是相反或对立的，所以不可以用“on the other hand”。句2的错误是“nevertheless”这个逻辑连接词表示转折—“虽然如此，然而”，而句2与句1间的逻辑关系不是转折关系而是递进或举例，所以可以修改为：

On one hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease, especially to those disabled who can avoid many difficulties by working at home.

或者：On one hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example，those workers who are disabled can avoid many difficulties by working at home.更多雅思备考信息，请关注苏州环球教育学校