来源:苏州环球教育
小编:Scofield 272 作为一个很牛掰的写作老师,欧,不,把牛掰,一位雅思写作老师,经常会被学生问到的一句话:
老师,我好方!怎么办?会不会考流程图?
我:我怎么知道?
学生: 那么怎么办?我不要考流程图~~
我:乖~乖~来,老师给你一剂良方,保你考试不慌!
来,在写作之前,我们先来搞一搞阅读。
其实剑桥雅思五中有一篇很好的流程图写作模板,请看。
The original patent outlined a three-stage process, 一开始介绍整个流程的步骤 in which用定语从句引导出整个过程的原材料 phenol and formaldehyde (from wood or coal) were initially combined under vacuum inside a large egg-shaped kettle. The result学会产出物的描写方式 was allowed to 用被动语态描写出整个过程 cool in shallow trays until时间的描述 it hardened, and then 并列关系引出 broken up and ground into powder. Other substances (可数名词,用来特指东西, 如 chemical substance ) were then顺序词 introduced: including表示大量的原材料时候可以这样写 fillers, such as wood flour, asbestos, or cotton, which increase strength and moisture resistance ,catalysts (substances to speed up the reaction between two chemicals without joining to either) and hex, a compound of ammonia and formaldehyde which supplied the additional formaldehyde necessary to form a thermosetting resin. 同位语的使用This resin was then left to cool and harden, and ground up a second time. The resulting granular powder was raw Bakelite, ready to be made into a vast range of manufactured objects. In the last stage, the heated Bakelite was poured into a hollow mould of the required shape and subjected to extreme heat and pressure, thereby ‘setting’ its form of life.
通过精读,划出了以上几个语言点~那么利用这些语言点,我们可以很轻松滴来写一篇雅思流程图了~来,我们来看一张剑桥8上的流程图~
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
就是这一张 ~
用刚刚圈出的文字其实很容易就可以把这篇流程图搞定。
The diagram outlines a three-stage process (总起描写所有过程,基本上就是照抄阅读,如果是四个步骤的话,那么只要把数字改掉就可以了), in which(增加语法分数的表达) limestone and clay (其实就是交代原材料而已)are initially(取代raw,写成 initially) combined for further crush. After being crushed into powder, the result would be allowed to go through the mixer until being fully mixed, and then can be heated in the rotating heater. The resulting granular powder(产出的粗糙颗粒) was raw cement, ready to be ground into final product-cement(用ready表示衔接前后二者关系). In the last stage, the cement would be packed into bags for further application.
仔细看看黑体字的部分,不难发现,其实就是把阅读中的黑体字拿来写了一篇流程题~看,是不是很简单呢?
所以说,遇到流程图不要怕~,过来背背我列出来的雅思阅读文章就不难啦~