苏州环球教育宋晓涛老师为大家带来2019年4月25日雅思大小作文的点评及范文解析。

　　A类小作文

　　【作文类型】折线图

　　【作文题目】旧题重现

　　【综合点评】本次线图重复2015年11月7日的考题，主要内容是英国的三种婚姻状况（all marriages/ first marriages/ re-marriages）的变化趋势。具体而言，all marriages主要呈现下降的趋势。first marriages 虽然也下降，但中间会有一个小波动。Re-marriages 是三条线中较为不同的一个，呈上升趋势。值得一提的是，三条线没有任何交叉点，因此考生们在写的时候主要描述趋势和对比以及补充相应数据即可，注意数据的加工处理。具体可参照剑桥雅思真题中的线图写法。

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　　A类大作文

　　【作文题目】Nowadays young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

　　【题目分析】观点类作文。这次作文系旧题重考，与2013年12月14号亚太区A类作文题目一致。考察内容比较浅显易懂，本题从侧面鼓励学生综合评估成市化进程对城市发展的助益，当然该趋势对农村的人力资源的剥夺也不可忽视，同学们可以视自己的语言能力水平决定是否双面写。

　　【题材类别】社会类

　　Urbanization, as one of the most notable features of today's world, has always been marked by social mobility. Amidst this trend, more and more young people end up   migrating to the cities for better education and work. In this essay, I will outline two main areas where such movement is likely to bring about more merits to both the young individuals and the  society as a whole.

　　Some would argue that the ongoing trend would further widen the gap between cities and countrysides in terms of economic development. They claim, for example, that the economy is made fragile when food production becomes inadequate because of the huge burst of people from rural to urban areas. To some extent, side effects like this are inevitable. However, a closer examination of this issue tellingly reveals that the dark sides  do not necessarily overshadow its bright ones.

　　There are clearly more advantages to this development. The most important area is the opportunity available to the young individuals. As the balance of power among groups of people has shifted both nationally and internationally, rural areas are losing its appeals in the provision for ample opportunities while developed cities are in much better position to provide young people with much wider range of  possibilities to thrive. Another area in which this trend is beneficial is in considering the long-term advancement of the society. Such movement responds to the progress of cities when meeting the demand of sizable workforce. Young job seekers are relatively more energetic and creative, which in turn accelerates the realization of urbanization and modernization.

　　In summary, in spite of some negative influence, the evidence suggests that young migrants benefit from having wider access to opportunity in cities and the society, in general, is also a beneficiary when the sustainable flow of  qualified workforce for economic development  is taken into account.