来源:环球教育
小编:长安 447苏州环球教育于莹老师此次对2018年12月8日的雅思写作考试进行点评,并且为大家提供当日大作文范文供参考。
A类小作文
【作文类型】静态饼图+表格
【作文题目】亚洲、美国、欧洲和其他地区在澳大利亚旅游人数占比和平均停留天数、住宿、主要活动的对比。
【综合点评】小作文:表格图加饼图 混合静态图,对于这种类型的题目关键得分点在于文字表格描述的部分,考生可以参考静态图的写作方法进行筛选比较,尤以饼图的部分为甚。对于表格部分,则可以侧重比较不同国家游客的偏好。行文部分需格外注意句型替换及用词多样性。
A类大作文
【作文题目】Some people think that schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability. Others believe that young people with different abilities should be educated together. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
【作文类型】讨论两方观点+自己观点
【题目分析】这个题目因为提到的是pupils,我门可以支持应该在一起教育,所以对题目中第一个观点进行了反驳。如果这个题目没有限定学生的年龄,我会两个方面都支持,然后结论是看学生的年龄,比如小学合在一起教,高中大学就可以分开教。
【题材类别】教育类
【参考范文】Nowadays, how to provide better education for students has needed discussing widely, and with the development of educational forms, more alternatives could be selected. Taking the difference between pupils and young people into consideration, some experts also believe that children with special talents should be taught separately, which I think can be a combination with the traditional mixed education.
Admittedly, the unique academic level of the individual cannot be ignored. Because of the various factors, including the influence of background, the mental development and so forth, we can find it obvious why students perform differently in studying, and realize the fact that the differences require the education system can identify and categorize students into specific level to provide personal training, which can be a helpful way to stimulate students' development in their interests and strengths.
However, no one would doubt the effectiveness of teaching students together, by which the youth can learn from others' strong points to offset one's weakness, especially when cultivating some social skills; besides, the demand of cooperation can be met in this kind of class, where students have the opportunity to conduct team work, and the ability gained from these activities can be useful in their future career. Not only students can benefit, but also the education system. Though the mixed education model, the compulsory courses can be applied around the country to guarantee the equity and quality of education for kids from different areas.
In conclusion, both ways are efficient and carry the good experience from parents and the society for the younger generation. In my opinion, it is worth considering to find a balance between putting them into practice under certain circumstances.