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遇雅思写作懵圈?环球老师手把手来教你

2016-10-25

来源:环球教育

小编:长安 691
摘要:

  好多同学在遇到雅思考试中的大杀器——写作,瞬间就一脸懵圈。

  其实想要写作成绩UP UP,最重要的就是要在平时积累足够多的语料;换而言之,就是要多看多想以及多背。可是环球教育(原环球教育)苏州学校朱丁琦老师每次一说这些,课堂里就会有雨后春笋般的黑人问号脸出现。那么究竟如何在短时间快速地把语料运用到写作中去呢?

  首先,选择对的语料来源很是必要。在可获得的资源里面,原版英文的著作当然是最好的,不过如果是针对托雅类写作的话,小说或者散文就不是很好的选择了,推荐大家看这个


  这个


  还有这个


  这些报刊上的文章不仅内容易懂,还保证都是具有一定文化水平的作者,非常值得学习。

  不过,对于那些木有时间急着考试的同学来说,这样的阅读太耗时了;最苦逼的,就是看了也不会用。这个时候,就显得以下材料弥足珍贵:


  不要震惊,无论你是考雅思还是考托福,剑桥雅思阅读就是很好的素材。好好阅读其中的文章,不仅在词汇量上会有很大的提升,语句写作上也会有很大的进步哦。

  举个例子:C4T4 P4的The problem of scarce resource




  这篇文章虽然是在讲能源运用,但是仔细看前三段的句首句,很容易发现这些句子都是很好的写作句式。

  第一段第一句:The problem of how health-care resources should be allocated or apportioned, so that they are distributed in both the most just and most efficient way, is not a new one.

  这句话其实就在描述某个问题是大家关注的焦点,不仅句子较长,从语言的表达上也非常的地道。从这一句上不难得出一个非常好的模板句:The problem of how/ what 引导的名词性从句 is not a new one.

  第二段中的第一句话:What is new is that, from the 1950s onwards, there have been certain general changes in outlook about the finitude of resources as a whole and of health-care resources in particular, as well as more specific changes regarding the clientele of health care resources and the cost to the community of those resources.

  句子很长,看的人头晕有木有? 精简一下,不就是说有一个关于某方面的观点么, 而outlook又是较不常见单词,写出来不是很好么。因此,又得出一句模板句:There has been an outlook about/regarding 主题.

  第三段中的第一句话,However at exactly the same time as this new realisation of the finite character of health-care resources was sinking in, an awareness of a contrary kind was developing in Western society:that people have a basic right to health-care as a necessary condition of a proper human life.

  此句当中有两个表达观点的单词,一个是realisation一个是awareness,推荐用在写作中。这句话的套路就更是很深刻了:However,at exactly the same time as this new realisation of 相关主题was sinking in, a contrary awareness that 观点句子 is developing。

  整理下,不难发现像这样的句子,在针对双边讨论的话题的写作中是非常有用的。

  口说无凭,我们来试验一下:

  2015.05.09 雅思写作话题 The development of technology is causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution if that everyone accepts a simpler life, while others believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  这篇文章的开头段就可以写成:

  The problem of how the ever-increasing reliance on technology has damaged the environment is not a new one. Every individual is faced with the need to decide the solution for this urgent situation. Although those technological optimists firmly believe that the advancement of technology can heal the earth, a simpler life, from my own perspective, is more suitable.

  而主体段的中心句也非常明确了,分别可以写成:

  There has been an awareness regarding this issue that only by more processed and developed technology can the problem be finally solved.

  而主体段第二段Topic sentence就可以写成:

  However,at exactly the same time as this new realisation of technological solution to the degradation of environment was sinking in, a contrary awareness that simpler life style brings about happier life is developing.

  好吧,有木有突然感觉有话可说了?其实不难发现,这样的语料利用的根本就是去模仿阅读中的语句,将其吸收,这样在写作时避免了模板式句子,也增加了语言分数。

  再接着往下阅读,section E 中的最后一句出现了:Thus in OECD countries as a whole, health costs increased from 3.8% of GDP in 1960 to 7% of GDP in 1980, and it has been predicted that the proportion of health costs to GDP will continue to increase. (In the USA the current figure is about 12% of GDP, and in Australia about 7.8% of GDP.)

  是不是好像不当心发现了什么?这不就是很好地写小作文动态图的语言么?不仅描写了数据从过去到将来预测,还很好地展示了预测的写法;语法角度上来说只用了平行结构,模仿起来也是相对比较容易的。



  在描写这些能源使用变化时不就可以使用上述句型了么~

  The energy derived from all sources as a whole experienced an upward trend from 1980 to 2016, and it has been predicted that the consumption of energy will continue to increase. (The current figure for petrol and oil is about 43 Quadrillion units, 25 qu for coal and natural gas, and  approximately 6 qu for Nuclear, solar/wind and Hydro-power.

  从这篇文章的例子其实不难看出,如果将许多阅读文章做好精读, 并且将其中的语料运用到写作中,可是会带来很多惊喜的哦!

  等等,你以为这样就结束了?Too young too naive!

  以上是苏州环球教育朱丁琦老师整理出的一系列语料列表,希望各位考生好好利用手头上的资源,考出理想成绩。

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