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2019年6月13日雅思大小作文点评及范文解析

2019-06-17编辑: 长安来自: 环球教育

  苏州环球教育朱丁琦老师为大家带来2019年6月13日雅思大小作文的点评及范文解析,希望对考生们有所帮助~

  A类小作文

  [作文类型] 柱状图

  [作文题目] The chart below shows the number of the magazines form five countries sold by person in 2000, 2010 and 2020.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  [参考图形]


  [综合点评]这是本年度柱状图第六次出现,可以说出题频率还是较高的,因此各位考生在备考过程中不要忽略柱状图的内容。从审题角度来说,先要分析图形的时间范围,明确是动态图和静态图;之后再针对考试内容进行分析。具体可以参考剑桥雅思9test2和剑桥雅思2test4 的柱状图。

  A类大作文

  [作文题目] Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  [题目分析] 本话题重复2018年11月24日话题,属于雅思写作老话题,也是课堂常分析话题。

  相似话题:

  1. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  2. Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address environmental problems at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  本话题属于agree or disagree 类型。讨论环境问题该由谁来解决,对比个人和政府还有公司之间的关系。重点在于题干中存在绝对单词only ,因此建议本话题采取否定态度 disagree, 要表明个人在环境保护中的重要作用。

  [题材类别] 环保 政府

  [参考范文]

  Environmental problems, such as ice-melting and greenhouse effect, have become increasingly severe in the last decades. Some people argue that only can governments and large companies address problems, while the individuals are too limited to make a difference on this issue. From my own perspective, not only do authorities and big enterprises have capacities to modify this condition but also every person can beautify our surroundings neat and tidy.

  To begin with, we should shoulder the obligation to take care of our unique and single earth. If rubbish were thrown here and there, the globe would become a horrible garbage yard, an irreversible disaster towards the whole eco-system, which is hardly imagined. By contrast, the entire world would be altered more harmonious and cleaner atmosphere due to environmental protection in mind and practical actions.

  Also, citizens' notions have a positive impact on governments' environmental strategy and companies' decisions. For instance, the suggestion of saving industrial water consumption aroused by a region or a union might be applied by governments through enacting laws to conduct the measure, however, which eventually will be carried out by single individuals.

  Admittedly, the authorities and large firms have the possession to contribute to our environmental improvement as well. It is companies' sufficient resources like wealth, brand influence that facilitates the protection more effectively. They could raise public awareness easily through some approaches, e. g., Public service advertising, which people cannot accomplish by one's aspiration. Nonetheless, the entire environmental career still relies on individual's devotion.

  In summary, both parts of powers need to be taken seriously. People acting as participants bring about the change reflected by the accumulated small efforts of every citizen. Meanwhile, the government and companies also play a leading role in environmental challenges. Only by a combination of all sides of contributions, can the world be ecological, balanced, and peaceful.


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