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2014年3月1日托福作文

2014-03-06

来源:苏州环球雅思

小编:史月 749
摘要:Do you agree or disagree the following statement:It's bad to move to new places because you will lose old friends

  Do you agree or disagree the following statement:

  It's bad to move to new places because you will lose old friends

  题目分析

  同不同意下面的说法:因为你会失去旧朋友所以搬家不好

  该题属于常规考题,属于因果关系类,论证过程注意分析其中因果关系不成立,并分析人们失去朋友的原因以及搬到新地方的优缺点,切入角度相对容易

  思路分析

  主体段1:搬到新地方确实会失去朋友,比如不经常见面,和旧朋友疏于联系

  主体段2:但是失去朋友并不是因为搬家造成的。有很多新的方式可以让人们和旧朋友依然保持密切联系。

  主体段3:搬到新的地方也有很多优点,比如:结交新的朋友,学会迅速适应新的环境等等。

  相关范文

  财富悬殊能成为好朋友吗

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Can two people be good friends if one person has more money than the other?

  Friendship is a relationship with unconditional support, love, care and a sense of security. A real friendship technically couldn’t be jeopardized by factors such as money.

  Two good friends with one of them richer are actually more likely to maintain a stable relationship than those who possess more equal wealth. When the relatively less rich person gets into financial trouble, he could easily turn to his friend who will help him through hardship financially. There was a well-known legend, dating back to the Spring and Autumn period which was approximately three thousand years ago, about Guan Zhong and Bao Shuya’s friendship. Guan was poor but very talented and Bao took a tremendous amount of money to assist him to study and establish his career. Years later, their friendship still was maintained so well that even Guan because the prime minister of the enemy state of Bao’s.

  In contrast, equally rich friends sometimes end up with being enemy. The reason is simple. The very nature of human being has one evil aspect: jealousy. Good friends usually know each other much better than the other people around. It is very hard to avoid that one of them starts comparing all sorts of things such as wealth, fame, achievements and so on. In Monte Christo, Fernandez was so jealous of Dantes that he eventually betrayed Dantes and didn’t hesitate to push him into the jail and stole his beautiful fiance.

  Those things I have mentioned above can be viewed as money is far less than important in a healthy friendship. What real friends can give us is that they are always there. A lot of my friends are working in careers such as freelance writing and mountain climbing. They don’t make as much money as I do. But when we get together and have a couple of drink, we never ever consider who is richer. Actually, this is the only moment when I am able to take off the mask and demonstrate a real me. One day, one of my best friends claimed that he went bankruptcy and he decided to pack up to go wandering first. He didn’t want any money from me but told me that he made friends with me not because of my wealth but my personality.

  The shining side of humanity is that we were born with free spirit and people make friends by looking for ones who share the same spirits. Money comes and goes easily and has nothing to do with friendship.


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