来源:苏州环球雅思
小编:李明明 862环球教育苏州分校 李明明
Task 1柱状图小作文
Thechart shows the percentage of spending on three categories: food and drinks,accommodation and entertainment in 5 age groups (under 30, 30-49, 50-59, 60-69,over 70).
解析:此次小作文考试难度不大,为常见的柱状图(bar graph)。由于按照5个年龄段来比较,容易写得比较啰嗦。注意使用代词,简化表达。可以参照Cam9 Test 2小作文的写法。
审题:常见题型。注意时态。然后按照百分比的数值和变化来决定分段。
注意事项:根据题目中给出的时间,注意文中时态。为避免重复,可以用there be、被动、年份+saw/witnessed.代词的使用.等途径来丰富表达。
难度:☆☆☆
Task 2 大作文
Some students take one year off betweenfinishing high school and going to university in order to travel or to work. Doyou think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
审题:审题重点在于关键词的划取并弄清楚任务要求(即提问方式)。话题属于教育类,关于利用间隔年(gap year)来工作或旅行优缺点比较和论述。此题为Cam 5Test 2的作文原题。
思路拓展:头脑风暴迅速列出间隔年的优点、缺点。
优点(good points/strengths/merits/advantages):a. 帮助学生开拓视野(broadenstudents’ horizon/learn about other cultures/make friends/ forge aninternational perspective),让学生初步了解社会(help students to have a general idea about how society works);b.让学生明白一技之长或专业技能的重要性(teach them about the necessity/significance of professionalskills/expertise/interpersonal skills/teamwork) , 为将来的择业和就业做好准备与铺垫(so that they can bebetter prepared for their future career/jobs); c.明白赚钱、生活不易,学会预算和合理安排开支,独立生活(learn tomake ends meet/spend money wisely; live independently).
缺点(disadvantages/on the negativeside/problems/demerits/weaknesses): a.学生容易受外界影响(subjected to external influences/being addicted to idle lifestyles),心思很难再回到学习上(find it hard toconcentrate on academic studies); b.接触到社会的阴暗面(come into contact with the dark side of life/social evils),继而沮丧或沉沦(self-esteem may suffer;feel depressed/frustrated; sink into depravity/degradation/vice)。
提纲:
P1:Introduction (gap year; to work ortravel; people hold contrasting views;也可以亮出自己的立场)
P2: Advantages (或让步段Admittedly...)
P3 Disadvantages
P4 Personally/As I see it,...
难度:☆☆☆☆