来源:苏州环球雅思
小编:苏扬 912【综合写作】
阅读内容:(1)可以开发old product 的new vision (2)可以用同一个name做相关周边 (3)可以和其他公司形成companion ship共同合作产品但依然不改变公司的冠名
听力内容: 反驳阅读中的内容。听力认为(1)new vision会使公司流失long time 消费者,因为他们会在不喜欢new vision的同时,认为old products是过时的东西,这样他们两个都不会买了 (2)出现周边产品不能保证它的品质,反而可能会有坏名声进而影响公司 (3)合作关系反而会造成竞争对手,比如:有肯呢个两家公司合作巧克力冰淇淋,做巧克力的那方也打算做冰淇淋,做冰淇淋的那方也打算做巧克力,这就抢了原始公司的生意
【独立写作】
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Spending a long time on watching sport in TV or following favorite sportteam has negative effect on our lives.
话题分析:
本次的话题从题材上是探讨的花费长时间在看体育节目或追随喜爱的队伍,是否会给生活带来消极影响。在写作时要注意话题相关的三个部分,即sport, life和effect,并且一定要将看体育节目或追运动队伍对生活产生的积极、消极影响进行比较。写作重点是对长期产生的negative effect进行详尽阐述。
从体裁来说本周写作是议论文,属于托福独立写作中常见的体裁,那么大多数考生在考试之前需要对给类型文体进行大量训练。
思路分析:
第一段:首段---背景+话题引入+个人观点(spending time on watching sports in TV or following favorite sport team hasmake influences on our lives, while spending too long time on doing this hasmore negative effects than positive ones);
第二段:指出观看体育节目或追随喜欢的球队,对个人生活有积极影响:是一种兴趣爱好,在闲暇空余时间里放松自己,打发时间(a way of entertainment, leisure time, relax themselves, pass the time);
第三段:然而,长时间花费在这上面,更多的是产生消极影响:一、过度浪费个人的时间与精力(excessive consumption of time and energy,)
第四段:消极影响:二、影响个人正常的生活与工作(the life and work of individuals, physical quality, Stay up late doing sth.,work efficiency)
第五段:点出个人观点,赞同:花费长时间在看体育节目或追随喜爱的队伍,会给生活带来消极影响(Spending a long time on watching sport in TV or following favorite sportteam has negative effect on our lives )。
参考范文:
【题目】
Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students'sports activities as they give to their libraries. Use specific reasons andexamples to support your opinion.
【范文】
A student's education does not only consist oflearning academic subjects. It is also important for students to develop otherskills, such as teamwork, and healthy habits that will last them a lifetime.One way to do this is to encourage more participation in sports activities.Although it is important to provide adequate funding for academic services suchas the school library, I believe it is important to fund sports activitiesequally.
A student's primary education goal is to pursueknowledge. Therefore, the school library is very important. However, theresources that a library buys are long-lasting. In addition, students now haveresources other than the school library to support their studies. For example,many have their own computers and access to the Internet. Sports activities, onthe other hand, require some investment every year. Equipment wears out andneeds to be replaced more often than library resources.
Furthermore, a school that provides good athleticequipment for its students will find that they are more willing to participatein physical activities. Since these activities are also an important part oftheir education, the importance of good equipment cannot be ignored.
Ideally, a school should provide its students witha well- balanced education that helps them develop all of their skills. Forthis reason, it is important that schools do not ignore sports activities.Setting aside more money for these activities will help schools to developbetter physical education programs and encourage more students to participatein them.