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小编:姚雪 1008Task 1 表格
Thetable gives information about annual salaries of five employment sectors inAustralia in 2006.
解析:此次小作文考试难度不大,表格一共15组数据,数量不算多,而且容易描述和比较。考生在写作时需要注意相似数据(如Engineering和ITand Telecommunication)和差距较大数据(如sales和traveling)之间的对比,多使用比较句式和衔接词,不用非得写出表格中的每一个数据,最后一段可以适当进行评论(如Overall,people in sales and engineering earnd much more than traveling in 2006.),注意全文的时态应为过去式。
Task 2
There is a large proportion of crime commited byteenagers, what are the causes? And how to reduce the crime rate?
题型:犯罪类
这是一道考过很多遍的青少年犯罪问题,写作老师在讲解犯罪类题材时一般都会提到这个例子,所以难度不算大。
审题:考生在审题时应注意,问的是青少年犯罪类高的原因和降低措施,不是犯罪类。
Causes:
1.网络、电视、广播等媒体播放大量暴力画面,误导年轻人。
Massmedias like the Internet, television and radio constantly broadcast violentcontents. As a result, teenagers areexposed to negative influences almost 24 hours per day.
2.青少年没有稳定经济来源,又容易虚荣心作祟,对于物质过度迷惑,容易导致财产犯罪。
Generallyspeaking, adolenscents are lack of financial income and they are vain. Beingobsessively keen on materials may easily bring about poverty crime.
Solutions:
1.政府制定严格的法律,限制暴力画面的比例和暴力等级;家长陪同孩子观看某些视频内容。
Oneof the most effective approaches adopted by the government might be regulating strict laws on violentimages. If they cross the maximum level or surpass the stated rate, they shouldbe banned.
2.家长、学校和社会大力宣传正确的价值观,打击攀比炫富现象;同时,普通市民要加强对于人身和财产的保护力度,不让青少年觉得有机可乘。
Theunhealty trend of comparing and flaunting should not be encouraged, especiallyamong the yongersters. Both parents and the public are responsible forequipping the youths with decent sense of value. What is more, one can never becareful enough. Increasing protection of ourselves as well as the property means less chances for crimes.
文章结构:
开头段:背景介绍+题目改写+过渡词引出下文
中间段:
1.cause1+cause2 solution1 + solution2
2.cause1+solution1 cause2+solution2
结尾段:重新总结causes和solutions