来源:苏州环球雅思
小编:钱婷婷 966Task1:小作文柱状图。The barcharts below show the percentage of boys and girls aged 5-14 in Australia whoparticipate in various activities during two-week period.
Task2: It has been suggested that allyoung adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helpingthe people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than benefits tothe community and the young adults themselves?
分析:本文是观点类文章,需要讨论年轻人应该在无偿帮助社区里人们一段时间,这件事对于社区和年轻人本人的弊处是否大于其利处。
开头段:同义替换题目,背景引入主题即可。结尾段:再次总结自己的主题,可以适当升华。
Body段思路idea拓展:
利处::
一,从青年人(youngpeople/youngster/)的角度来看,能学到书本中学不到的东西,为今后工作做铺垫theymay learn something practical that they could never be taught at school inorder to lay the foundation to the future career ;可以接触不同类型的人,为今后更好的处理人际关系;they may also meet up with various people, thus helping them tobecome mature when dealing with interpersonal relationship.
二,从社区(community)的角度看,能节省资金更好的为社区居民服务itcan save much more money for the better community service
弊处:
一, 从年轻人角度而言,占用学习时间从而影响学习。Itwill undoubtedly take youngsters much more time to so that the voluntary workwill interrupt their study.
二, 从社区而言,面临组织上的困难itis difficult for community to organize them.