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22日托福写作解析

2014-02-25

来源:苏州环球雅思

小编:朱丁琦 888
摘要:1.说明bonobosare less aggressive than chimpanzee2.说明bonobos不像chimpanzee一样会欺负弱小3.指出chimpanzee不仅吃植物还吃肉类

综合写作

bonobochimpanzee对比

阅读部分:

1.说明bonobosare less aggressive than chimpanzee

2.说明bonobos不像chimpanzee一样会欺负弱小

3.指出chimpanzee不仅吃植物还吃肉类

听力内容:

1. 反驳阅读内容,指出动物在不同环境中的反应不同,虽然bonobos可能在captivity下没有野外aggressive,但不说明bonobos没有chimpanzee 要挑衅。

2. 听力指出人们发现在bonobos群体中,老的容易被小的欺负,科学家们忽略了这样的一个hidden rule.

3. 反驳听力,说chimpanzee吃肉是因为他们的habitat被人类的行为破坏,不得已才huntother animals。而bonobos的居住地是isolated的,所以不存在问题。如果bonobos也面临同样的问题,他们也有可能要吃肉了。

独立作文

Do you agree ordisagree the following statement: People who develop many different skills aremore successful than people who focus on one skill only.

话题分析:

本周话题是托福常考话题中的成功的要素:有多种技能的人比只有一项技能的人更容易成功, 同意与否。 重复2010626日北美/2011827日大陆机经。关于成功的要素,比如说技能的多少,人际关系和学习一门还是多门。因此在备考时建议考生可以充分准备关于成功的要素和成功的相关内容。

话题解析:

第一段:背景和话题转述并且表明态度:拥有更多的技能的人比较容易成功(be more likely to be successful)在这里要指出更多技能包含交际,表达,制造等多方面能力;
第二段:表达自己观点的第一个理由-会更受欢迎。 主要原因是有多种技能的人往往能把事情做得比较好,从而受人欢迎 be popular among among others, those whohave mastered multiple skills)
第三段:阐述第二个理由-更容易交朋友。也就是多种能力能吸引教友。 cultivate and boost friendship, makefriends, fellowship, companion)
第四段:反面论证,指出只关注一种技巧会带来负面影响(be detrimental to sth., cons, negativesides, inconvenience in daily lifedistraction)甚至是给自己造成不便;
第五段:重申个人的意见(those who hold a wealth of knowledge cangain more popularity, fume and success)

参考例文:

Today'sworld demands a person who has the knowledge of everything and not focused on aparticular thing. If you can do so many things you will be popular among peoplearound you and able to make so many friends of different fields. By learningmany skills a person can guide others a little bit about so many things, ablesolve problems at basic level and have a huge knowledge of everything. That'swhy I agree with the statement that a person who learn many skills will be moresuccessful.

First, aperson will be more popular and attractive if he knows many skills. Because ifa person knows so many things, he can impress everyone by helping them. Forexample, my neighbor knows cooking and gardening very well and she always helpsme whenever I have got problems while I am cooking or my plants looks wiltedand weak and all the person who leaves in our apartment come to her for help inthe same.

Second, if aperson learns many skills, he will be able to make friends from many differentfields that might be supportive for future. Because if you know so many peopleyou can get information about other fields and use them for your work or joband other opportunities that you can get from them. For instance when myhusband was in graduate school he was involved in many social and physicalactivities and because of that he made lots of friends from those fields. Whenhe was searching for a job, he found a connection with a chairperson ofmultinational company who offered him a job with very high salary andreputation.

Anotherreason is that if you learn only one skill your knowledge will be limited to aparticular thing and it will always be a bug in your head. But by knowing manyskills you can live easily anywhere with those skills and techniques around theworld. For example one of my best friend who was always focused on her studies.When she moved with her boyfriend, she doesn't know how to use a simple vacuumcleaner or a microwave, because of that she always had a fight with her boyfriend.

Inconclusion, a person will be more successful if he knows many skills, he willbe having lots of friends, popularity, fame, reputation and makes life mucheasier. But by knowing only one skill he will be limited to his own cocoon. Soits better to be a jack in all trades than master of one.


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