Integrated Writing

　　话题：Hammerhead sharks特殊头型的用途

　　阅读观点

　　1. improve turning speed

　　2. improve sensibility to the electronic field

　　3. help capture preys

　　听力观点【反驳阅读】

　　1. 跟骨头和关节有关，并且实验的鲨鱼是小鲨鱼，比大鲨鱼灵活。other structures may also help do this like a structure called the vertivrate which can also help the sharks make quick turns. Besides, the sharks being tested are young sharks which are more flexible than the older ones so the result might not be so accurate

　　2.所有鲨鱼都是30cm距离接受磁场 not help sense electric field. Researchers did an experiment where a wire has been put in the ocean and is attached to the bottom of the sea. They let all types of sharks make their hunting. It turned out all sharks are able to detect the wire at the same time with the same distance. So hammerhead sharks are not more superior than others.

　　3. 靠近眼睛，当武器用久了会瞎掉，而且不是常规行为。Because there are eyes located on each side of its head. Using the head to catch prey could hurt the eyes and cause blindness. Plus, there is only one observation to observe the sharks using head to capture food. More observations should be done to further prove that.

　　Independent Writing

　　The rules of society today are too strict for young people to follow or obey.

　　【考题内容】是否同意以下观点：当今社会对年轻人设定的要求太高了。

　　【题型分析】重复2012.10.12 NA题，而且这题在最近几个月的机经中也反复出现了很多次。本题属于事实类的题型，各个分论点需要写同意或者不同意的理由，来支持自己的观点。

　　【谋篇布局】

　　Para 1: Introduction.(背景引入，争论点引入话题，摆明立场)

　　以背景引入，阐明当今社会竞争的激烈。两拨人阐明不同的观点。摆明自己的论点：社会对年轻人设定的要求是很高。

　　Para 2: Body Paragraph 1(分论点，解释，举例)

　　因为激烈的职位竞争，社会对个人能力的要求提高了The requirement of individual ability increased a lot in recent years. 因果链拓展：Due to the fierce completion in job market, nowadays the entrepreneurs require not only outstanding GPA but also relative working experiences, especially those in large company. 举例：What I know is that some of my classmates spend 4 four days per week to gain an intern experience in Fortune 500 company, and what is more, she must also care about their schoolwork, in order to get a high GPA. Moreover, Companies also hope to recruit people employee who is fast-learning and mature, further improving the difficulty for young to find a job.

　　Para 3: Body Paragraph 2(分论点，解释，举例)

　　在道德方面，社会对年轻人的要求也非常的严格The young are required to obey some strict traditional rules. 举例For example, in China, the society always want young people to be modest, which is not suitable in the contemporary society to some extent. Another example is, in the bus or subway, young people are expected to stand all the time, letting the old to enjoy seats. However, young people are really tired after working and deserved to sit for a while.

　　Para 4: Body Paragraph 3(分论点，解释，举例)

　　在家庭生活中，年轻人需要遵守的规则相比之下也变的很严格。举例：for instance, the one child policy in China and Japan already entered into old people aging society. Taking China as an instance, young people living in the old days have brothers and sisters, so they can take care of their parents together. By contrast, the young in this day and age need to take care of look after parents alone, a huge burden in mental and material aspects. Change of age structure will make the situation more widespread.

　　Para 5: Conclusion(总结论点)

　　综上所述，当今社会对年轻人的要求的确很严格。