来源:苏州环球雅思
小编:钱婷婷 580Task1:表格,男女比例,the number of males in every 100 females (ratios) in six continentsin 1950 and 2005
Task2: Somepeople think only best students should be rewarded, others think we shouldreward students who make progress.
开头段:
1. 背景句(可以涉及rewards对于学生grades/academic study的重要性)
2. 一方认为onlybest students should be rewarded, 另一方认为students who make progress should be rewarded
3. 自己观点(赞成former/latter/或者自己这种两个观点都可以,最重要的是自己论述的时候可以论证清楚)eg:both types of students should be rewarded, which is beneficial for the learningenvironment in the campus
Body段思路idea拓展:
一.Beststudents should be rewarded
Advantages:
1. Beststudents付出比普通同学更多的努力
2. 奖励beststudents能够创造良好的学习和竞争氛围
Disadvantage:可能会降低普通学生的积极性,班级水平参差不齐
二.Studentswho make progress should be rewarded
1. 奖励有进步的学生时对他们努力的认可(recognition)
2. 能够激励班上大多数学生(motivate)
结尾段:
结尾的时候,再次总结自己的观点,重点是同义转换(用多样的方式表达同样的意思)切勿直接照抄开头段的内容。
拓展:
奖励 reward 可做名词和动词、hortation/encouragement/
好学生Good students/ pupils/ topstudents/ intelligent students
普通学生 common students/ ordinarystudents/ average students/ regular students