A类小作文

【作文类型】线图

【作文题目】: The line graphs shows thepercentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country.

【作文图片】（回忆版本，仅供参考）

【综合点评】动态中的多线图，难度中等，但是由于此图为4线构成，根据我们已知中间段最多为3段的只是来看，考生在分段的时候要多加思量，其次，动态图的写作尤其要注意，必须充分运用动态图的词汇和句型，哪怕是其中的任何一个介词、数据、时间的抄誊方法都不能有错误。

【真题解析】

P1（改写题目+总体趋势）

Thecurve-chart provided reveals different proportions of cinema attendants fromfour age groups in a certain country. Overall, it demonstrates that people whoare above 50 years old have an increasing tendency than other three age groups.

P2 (把age14-24,25-34, 35-49三个年龄组归为一个段落，总结特征）(部分动态句子参考）

1. TopicSentence：Theperiod given in question witnessed a similar trend in cinema attendance from 14years old to 49 years old.

2. 1978-1998,三个年龄组的变化趋势都是先降后升，形状如对勾图，对构图参考词汇可以是before， after，或者是 be replace by，followed by,但是注意三个年龄组先降后升后1998年的数值与1978年的数值大小都是有区别的，14-24岁是不变，25-34是下降，35-49是上升。

The percentage of people decreased to.......in the year,followed by a gentle increase to .......in the years....

3. 1998-2003：这段时间三个年龄组都经历了一段平稳不变期。参考词汇短语是experienced a stable period/stablized at 90%，70%,，60%perspectively

4.2003-2008,14-24.25-34以及35-49岁的年龄组都经历了下降，只是前两者是微降（dip/declinemoderately），后者是大幅下降（fallconsiderably/remarkably）

P3（把age50+分为单独一组分析）

1. Topicsentence：However，people above 50 years old presenteda slightly different picture，whose proportion grew modestly from 40% to 50%.

2. 1978-1998：对勾图，1998回到了1978的数值，参考词汇可以是

fall back to the 1978 figure

3. 1998-2003:此段时间一直保持1978年的比例不变

Remain constant at 40% in the following 5 years.

4. 2003-2008:上升到50%

Rise quickly to 50% during the last period

P4 (结尾段可以和开头段合并或分开，为了条理性更好，同时兼顾时间紧张等因素，考生可以根据自身情况来决定具体做法）

A类大作文

【作文题目】In many countries, there is no enough recycling of wastematerials(eg.paper,glass,cans) What are the reasons?What can be done toencourage recycling?

【题目分析】 报告类环境类的文章，审题方面抓住核心词：recycling of waste materials，观点的拓展围绕回收利用废物来展开讨论，探索回收力度不足的原因和解决方案。

【题材类别】社会类/环保类

【类似真题】

2005.08.06

Manypeople say that we have developed a “throw-away”culture, because we are fillingup our environemnt with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fullydispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures canyou recomend reducing this problem?

2007.12.01

Wehave entered a throw-away society and fill the environent with rubbish. Whatare the causes and what are your solutions?

【谋篇布局】

报告类的文章，从文章结构来讲，主体段可以选择一段写原因，一段写方案，只要原因一和方案一对应，原因二和方案二对应即可，也可以一段写原因一盒方案一，一段写原因二，方案二。从观点的构思和拓展来讲，要求考生写出很多国家对废物回收的力度不足的原因和解决方案，那么事件的发生总归是有一个主语的，在这里找出实施此动作的不同的主语，就有了不同的思路，我们原因和对应的方案各自提供两种供大家参考

【原因】  1: 个人环保意识淡薄：lower awareness of environmental protection——do not know how to classify materials.

        2: 政府实施力度不够：it is thegovernment to blame for lacking of implementation ——no high technology nor infrastructure

【方案】 1：提高意识，积累环保知识，付诸行动：accumulate knowledge of classifying recycling items like paper,glass and cans into recyclable resources and non-recyclable resources

       2：发展高新科技，改善社会基础设施：givepriority to developing high technology in order to reproduce materials andimprove social infrastructue by setting new garbage collections or rubbish cans

Sample Answer

Para 1:Introduction.（背景引入，摆明用意）

Currently, we have entered athrow-away society and fill the environent with rubbish. As a result, the methodof dealing with the rubbish is an essential task. However, it is believed thatmany countries do not have the waste materials classified into a right way. Andthis essay is to analysize the reasons and give corresponding solutions.

Para 2: Body Paragraph1 (原因段)

When it comes to the causes of lackingof wastes classification, there are mainly two possible reasons. To begin with,in individual aspect, lower awareness of environmental protection is the rootcause. To be specific, we just do not have enough knowledge nor experience toput waste materials into different ways for collection. For example, finishingreading a piece of paper or drinking up a can of coke, we just throw paper andcans away and never pay attention to their use. Under such conditions, plentyof resources are wasted in our daily life. Also, in country aspect, it is thegovernment to blame for lacking of propagation and impementation of wasteissues. In other words, it is because there is no enough high technology noradvanced social infratructure to recycle, which makes the problem worse.

Para 3: BodyParagraph 2（方案段）

Given the severity of the reasonsdiscussed above, we have no option but to take strict measures to resovle theproblem. First, it is our duty to help the earth turn into a more beautifulplace to live. That means people need to accumulate knowledge of classifyingrecycling items like paper, glass and cans into recyclable resources andnon-recyclable resources, which can make useful materials be used again.Moreover, local governments should spare no effort to better our recyclingfacilities. Exactly, The priority to developing high technology should be givento improve recycling efficiency, and improving social infrastructues likesetting new garbage collections in a community or rubbish cans in the street inorder to reproduce materials also should be taken into account

Para 4: Conclusion（总结）

To summarize, the reasons to result ashortage of waste assortment are varied and we should take stringent measuresboth in an individual way and a government way. Only by a connection of the twomeans can we guarantee a better environment.

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