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11月21日雅思写作机经

2015-11-25

来源:苏州环球教研中心

小编:张文倩 1431
摘要:2015年11月21日雅思写作考试权威点评 by环球教育苏州分校 张文倩

AA类小作文

【作文类型】柱状图

【作文题目】: 五个国家(意大利新西兰英国越南印度)人数占澳大利亚移民占比变化(1962-2002

【作文图片】(回忆版本,仅供参考)

【综合点评】比较常规的动态图。需要注意的是动态图的分段问题,可以根据变化趋势分段。其次,注意动态图的趋势表达的方向与程度、交叉值等。单词和句型注意表达的多样。

A类大作文

【作文题目】Insome societies, the role of amother differs in some ways the roles of a father, why do you think these differences exist? How might theparental role develop in the future?

【题目分析】家庭类

【题材类别】报告类

【类似真题】

09.10.08

Somepeople think that family life and parents have great influence on children’sdevelopment, while others consider that external influence plays a moreimportant role in children’s life. Discuss both views and give your ownopinion.

【谋篇布局】

Para 1: Introduction.

Parenting is an indispensable part of a child’s growth. However,in some countries, a mother plays a different role from a father does. In thisessay, the possible reasons why different roles exist will be presented, andmeanwhile the development of parental role will be discussed.

Para 2: BodyParagraph 1

There are several reasons accounting for the differences. Tobegin with, the character of males and females determines the different roles.Mothers tend to be mild, patient and considerate, thus they can care for theirchildren in every aspect of daily lives. That means mothers can not only dealwith daily routines but also perceive the emotional problems of their children.It is no wonder that once children get into trouble, they will ask help fromtheir mothers without hesitation. By contrast, fathers usually play a ratherstrict role in family since they are rule-makers. As long as children behaveimproperly, fathers will punish their children.

Para 3: BodyParagraph 2

In addition, due to the time spent with children, thecontribution of parents to children’s growth is different. In some countries,females often take an easy job or they choose to be a housewife, hence mothershave more time to focus on children’s physical and mental growth. Unlikemothers, fathers have to be the pillar of a family so that the economic burdenis put on their shoulders. Therefore, compared with mothers, fathers spend lesstime on family and children.

Para 4: Body Paragraph3

With the advances of our society, it is no doubt that theparental role will develop greatly. On the one hand, parents are still theguides for their children, offering opinions and suggestions. On the otherhand, parents will be true friend to their children. Parents will sit by theirchildren, listening to their inner voice and sharing secrets together.

Para 5: Conclusion

Inconclusion, it is the unique characters and financial burden that build thedifferent roles of mothers and fathers. In the future, parents will be not onlythe first teacher of their children but also the sincere friends at any time.

BA类小作文

【作文类型】表格

【作文题目】: 五个国家healthspending GDP

A类大作文

【作文题目】Toomuch emphasis put on go to university for academic study. We should encouragepeople to have vocational education since there are not enough qualifiedtradespeople, electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?

【题目分析】教育类

【题材类别】同不同意型

【类似真题】

10.05.08

Schoolsshould concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will beuseful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are notuseful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【谋篇布局】

Para 1: Introduction.

Nowadays a growing number of people attach importance toeducation, therefore attending university is the top priority for many highschool graduates. However, some people point out that vocational educationshould be encouraged. And I totally agree with this opinion.

Para 2: Body Paragraph 1

First of all, the development of the society requires qualifiedtechnicians in various fields. Currently, technology has already penetratedevery corner of the world. With the progress of society, some infrastructureneed people who have professional knowledge and qualifications to build andmaintain its daily operation. Besides, domestic appliances also require thesetechnicians to deal with the possible problems. Therefore, vocational educationis indispensable for a nation.

Para 3: Body Paragraph 2

Secondly, vocational education provides a good chance for somestudents. It is no denying that not everyone is good at academic subjects, suchas math, languages and history. Some students are non-academic inclined, but artsand crafts can stimulate their interest and arouse the passion in these work.Interest is the best teacher. If without vocational education, these studentswould gradually be weary of studying and get depressed. So vocational educationopens another door for those students.

Para 4: Body Paragraph 3

Some people may argue that only by attending university can wegain success. It is true that people can acquire a wide range of knowledge andaccumulate various experiences in university. But all these are based on thediligence and hard work. And vocational education can also lead graduate tosuccess, as long as people always are studious.

Para 5: Conclusion(总结论点)

Inconclusion, vocational education is an inseparable part for both society andstudents, since it can meet the various needs of people and guarantee thesustainable development of the society. In my opinion, just like universityeducation, vocational education should be a wise choice.


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