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袁凯:6月6日雅思写作考试回顾

2013-07-05

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摘要:
Task 1
The two pie charts give information about energy forms used in Australia in 2008 and a prediction for 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
小作文是多饼图,与剑7的Test 4非常类似。
开头段写法比较常规,还是要突出总体趋势,可以简介下能源变化趋势。
单个图表内部比较时,注意主次之分,按能源结构比例大小分类阐述。
纵向比较中,将前后图变化较大者进行描述对比,注意时态是将来时,可以出现如 be expected to或者 be predicted to之类的替换将来时表达方法。

Task 2
有人认为政府应该帮助和照顾老年人,有人认为人应该为自己将来的生活省钱。
Some think it is the government's responsibility to provide financial support to old people after they retire while others believe individuals should save money for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
分析:
此题为双边讨论型题,为政府类题目;两方面都有正确的方面,可进行综合论述;
政府财政支持存在合理性,可以从税收taxation,国民政策national policies and social welfare等方面进行阐述;
个人方面,可以从未雨绸缪,预防的重要性进行剖析。很多人认为国家政府应该负责全民退休养老,这个观点是对的,但是不能忽略个人预防的重要性。

Task 2 例文
The sophistication of a societal structure is only justified on the basis of its system of social welfare, which, on a large scale, is closely related to the living conditions of the whole nation. An outstanding criteria for such basis lies in the financial aid from the government to the retired who, in another sense, are tax payers and are subject to such nationwide support legitimate in every terms. Truth being told, however, a precautional act of setting up a personal fund is also agreeable and has an element of truth as is analysed in the following essay.
Taxation is responsible for the largest coverage of national expenditures, as a result of which national projects should entail systematic welfare to guard against risks for the retired. A thorough system of protective policies is fundamental to social stability and sustainable development.
However, phenomenal and infrastructural as the national support is, the individual participation toward a sound well-being serves as a haven against unforeseeable disasters in the life of the retired people due to the benefits of personal funds, which boast of much convenience and more flexibility. Compared to governmental aids, individual saving is a sound choice in special occasions.
Overall, the flexibility of personal funds makes itself as good a choice as governmental aids. What the government should do is boost the economy so as to improve the life standard of its people, making them less vulnerable to disasters and difficulties.


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