来源:苏州环球雅思
小编:夏明洋 557Task1
Thetable below shows the salary of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.(USdollars)
Country | starting | After 15 years | Max | Years taken to the top |
Australia | 36000 | 52000 | 52000 | 8 |
Denmark | 38000 | 48000 | 48000 | 9 |
Luxembourg | 45000 | 85000 | 130000 | 30 |
Korea | 36000 | 48000 | 49000 | 34 |
Japan | 28000 | 36000 | 53000 | 37 |
分析:本次作文看似是静态图,但会运用到动态图的理论。即从起薪到15年过后有一个时间跨度。
Main features:
1)Luxembourg起薪最高,日本起薪最低,Denmark起薪第二,与Australia和Korea相似(both 36000)
2)15年后,Luxembourg薪资几乎长了两倍,保持最高,日本长到36000,仍然最低。澳洲长到第二高;Denmark与Korea相同。
3)Luxembourg,与Japan工资还有很大长动空间,其余基本15年后基本不变。
4)Luxembourg,Korea,Japan 均需要超过30年的时间达到最高工资,而Australia,Denmark要少的多。(分别8年,9年)
Task2
Developmentof technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think thesolution is that everyone accepts a simpler life,while others believe thattechnology can solve these problem,
Discussboth views and give your own opinion.
本次作文both sides相对比较清晰,难在ideas拓展。
A:Livinga simpler life is a ideal measure to improve environmental problems caused bytechnology.
B.The problems can be resolved by technology itself.
参考文章:
Technologybrings tremendous conveniences to our lives,while also leading to serousenvironmental concerns. The question over the solutions of these problems hasalways been disturbing us and agreement can hardly be reached. Some insist thatthe very recipe is to turn to simpler life ways.
Theview is strongly supported by the fact that many cities in the world areencouraging their citizens to take public transport instead of private vehiclesand the policy has achieved extremely positive environmental results. Lessvehicles mean less emissions and better air conditions. Residents in somecities are even advocated to take bicycles to minimize the negative effectscaused by the increasing transports. In addition, The advancement of technologyrequires constant supply of natural resources. If we all adapt to a simplerlife way, a sustainable development will be realized,which will consequentlybenefit the development of later generations.
Onthe other hand, some people propose totally different idea and they claimtechnology will resolve its own problem as it continuously develops. Theconstant study and research to the clean energies is a convincing evidence tothis. Now many vehicles and machines can be powered by electricity and solarenergy. Scientists are also trying to find more renewable energies, such astide,wind and geothermal energy, as alternative energies to oil and coal, whichare hugely dirty and environmentally harmful.
Asfar as l am concerned, the two sides both hold well-groundedexplanations,meaning a simpler life and the power of technology are bothimportant aspects in bettering the environmental conditions. Only when the twosides are integrated can the best living environment be achieved.