来源:苏州环球雅思
小编:陆婧 570Integrated Writing
话题:讲道路限速的问题(regulatingspeed on the road)
阅读观点
1. 减少事故,举例19xx-19xx年间限速了,事故从xx减少到xx。
2. 保护空气质量,说减少了汽车行驶,然后排放温室气体减少。
3. 这样做很economy,解释说slower-fewerfuel所以少花钱。
听力观点【反驳阅读】
1. 事故减少完全是限速,可能是wellread design和优质的car equipment。
2. 空气质量说。调查说问世气体中由汽车排放的一个比例是0.1%,就是说汽车排放量不会因为限速很大改善。
3. 举例反驳。如果一个track driver被限制速度。开的慢-时间长-那么运费成本则会增加。所以并不是很经济的做法。
Independent Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement?
In modern times, grandparents cannot givetheir grandchildren useful advice because the world of today and the world of50 years ago are too different.
【考题内容】你是否同意一下观点?因为现在的世界和50年前相比已经很不一样了,所以我们的爷爷奶奶不能给他们的孩子有用的建议。
【题型分析】比较题。该题属于较老考题,重复2010.10.22NA和2012. 09.08 NA。
【谋篇布局】
Para1: Introduction.(背景引入,真论点引入话题,摆明立场)
用年龄和智慧为背景引入话题There is a common expression that goes,“with age comes wisdom.” Wisdom is the ability to use your past experience tomake good decisions about your future.摆明自己的立场Regardless of how much the world haschanged in the past fifty years, I still believe the advice my grandparents cangive me is good.
Para2: Body Paragraph 1(分论点,解释,举例)
我们的爷爷奶奶有着丰富的生活和社会经历。Grandparents each have their owninspiring stories of success or painful lessons they have learned from theirown mistakes. These experiences can still help us young people avoid taking somany detours and hence shorten our way to success.
Para3: Body Paragraph 2(分论点,解释,举例)
Grandparents对我们非常的了解,所以不管世界怎么变化,他们都能提出最适合我们的建议。Grandparents have been around us for avery long time and, therefore know more not only of the world but also of us.
Para4: 让步段(分析反方观点,进行批判性说明)
很多人认为Grandparents可能会对新星的领域不是很了解,比如说网络。 Admittedly, there are some areas in which I cannot go to mygrandparents for advice, namely technology. Cell phones and computers were notaround until my grandparents retired, so they have never had to use this kindof technology for work or study.但是我们只要合理的采取Grandparents的建议,就不会产生这样的问题。
Para5: Conclusion(总结论点)
综上所述,虽然现在或者50年后跟过去已经不一样了,但是我们还是能够选择性的选择接受他们的建议。