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2013年12月7日雅思考试写作点评

2013-12-11

来源:苏州环球雅思

小编:朱丁琦 626
摘要:2013年12月7日雅思考试写作点评--环球教育苏州分校 朱丁琦

Task oneBar chart

The percentage of male and female workersin different types of employment.

真题点评:表格图,针对三个不同年份,在五个行业中从业人员的男女比例变化情况,属于动态变化的写作,在写作时需要使用动态的解题思路,即描述各对象随着时间所发生的变化。重点在数据的分析,强调每个数据分类和上升下降变化以及对比。

考情分析:本次表格题属于今年为本年九次考察,常见的男女数量不同问题,属于较简单题型,建议可以利用剑桥雅思2test1或者剑桥雅思7 test1的表格图进行练习。值得注意的是今年11月16日与11月30日的考试中小作文都是表格图而今年上半年基本上都是线图与柱图,不难得出结论,在临近年底的时间,由于题库不够大的因素,在剩余的两场里面,上半年不常出现的饼图很有可能出现,当然地图也有很大可能性。

Task Two Argument

It is important to preserve both theculture and environment of the places you visit, but some people think it isimpossible to be a responsible tourist. agree or disagree?

真题解析:对于旅行者来说,保护旅游区的文化和环境很重要,但是很多人认为这不是旅行者的义务。这篇作文从体裁上属于argumentation,从题材上属于旅游环保类型。也就意味着在写作过程中需要将这两方面都结合起来,重点在旅游话题上面。考生在复习时可以参考20081120日雅思机经话题(International travel is becoming cheaper, and more andmore countries open their door and with more and more tourists. Do theadvantages of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?越来越便宜的国际旅游业使得越来越多国家开放,并且使得越来越多的人旅游。增加的旅游业带来的好处多于坏处么?)


写作分析:

该题在解题思路上比较灵活,建议写成一面倒加上让步段。在思考的时候可以从多个不同角度进行分析。 以下提供笔者的思路及写法。

思路分析范例:

文章结构:五段论

1.开头陈述(背景+话题引入+个人观点---不仅旅游者要保护环境,多方人员也要参与)

2.让步段:

承认旅游者在旅行中对当地环境造成了一定的负面影响,需要参与到环境保护中。

3.观点段:其他人员,当地居民都要采取行动保护环境. 另外政府也要参与到环境保护中

4.总结段:重申自己观点

参考范文
Recent years have witnessed a prosperity of tourism, no matter domestic orabroad. Yet, many nations have become more aware of the environmental issueseach nation faces, such as air and water pollution caused by the surging numberof tourists. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of travelers toprotect the environment whereas those who are opposed to it assert that thesevisitors could not shoulder this. It is my belief that the tourists are not theonly one to concern the issue about environment.

Admittedly,the travelers are partially responsible for the protection due to the fact thatthey, indeed, lay more stress on the host city. This can be best exemplified bythe case of wilderness tourism, a very popular means in recent decades.  An overwhelming amount of people pour intothe remote areas in the name of exploration and traveling. However, thiscertainly interrupt the pace of local citizens. Worse, whatever they bring withthem, namely the so called ‘ civilization of modern world’, such as plastics,tissues and hair spray,  which aredisposed unintentionally, have heavily pollute the areas and even killed someanimals. Therefore, it is impossible for the tourists to get rid of theobligation of environment preservation.

Nevertheless,the local citizens also play an essential role in this aspect. As they are thereal one who gain benefits through tourism and it is their decision in openingto the outside to boost the economy, they, actually, should take the duty. Itis not a challenge for them to inform the outsiders to stop throwing therubbish and be more environmental friendly. Moreover, the local governmentanothergainer in tourism, has the right to produce laws concerning the right behaviorsand actions. Proper guidance during this process is also guaranteed if theauthorities being part of it.

To sum up, all the participators in the tourism should be takeninto granted when considering the environment and the traveling.


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