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2013年11月21雅思考试写作解析

2013-11-25

来源:苏州环球雅思

小编:朱丁琦 618
摘要:2013年11月21雅思考试写作解析--环球教育苏州分校 朱丁琦

TASK 1 地图题

Compare thechanges of town Bridell from 1800 to 2000.

真题点评:地图题,比较一个名为Bridell的地方在两百年的时间里面的变化。地图题注重随着时间写空间变化,强调方位以及地理特征相互之间的关系,因此在写作时要着重描写变化和左右。


考情解析:这是继1010日之后再次出现雅思的地图题,基本遵循了雅思出题的规律,差不多在一个至一个半月的时间出现图形题。在这样的情况下本月30日的考试出现流程图或者地图的可能性大大减少,而在12月中下旬出现地图题的可能性有所增加。


写作注意事项

l  仔细阅读题干要求,特别注意小标题

l  分析地图中重要标志代表的意义

l  在读懂题目后按照一定顺序写作, 总分总

l  适当运用表示时间,地点和方位的句型


参考图形




TASK 2

Studying inanother country helps students learning the local culture and languages. Do youagree or disagree?

真题解析:在其他国家学习有助于学生学习当地的文化和语言。你赞成还是否定这个观点。本题从体裁上属于议论文,从题材上属于教育类型话题,并且重复2009314日雅思写作机经(More and more students choose to go to another countryfor higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems?越来越多的学生选择去另一个国家接受高等教育,你认为这件事情的优点多与缺点么?)属于雅思常考话题,也是考生需要进行练习的基本文章之一。

写作分析:这道题在思路上比较灵活,建议写成一边倒加上让步段,即承认出国留学对于语言和文化的学习有很多好处,但是也存在一定的负面影响。

思路分析范例:

文章建议写成五段论

首段:背景信息+话题引入+个人观点(主赞成)

主体段:1. 赞成该观点的原因一

出国留学可以快速的学习其他国家的语言,尤其是英语法语这样的主流语言。 对学生的未来发展有很大的好处。

       2. 赞成该观点的原因二

在另外一个国家学习可以更好地与当地人交流并且交朋友,这些是从其他手段所无法获得的。

       3.让步段,承认出国留学带来一些负面影响。

在另外一个国家学习往往会有比较大的经济压力。除此之外还有可能要承受思乡之苦。 但是这些都可以通过打工或者现代通讯工具来解决。

总结段:重申观点信息

参考范文:

Recentdecades have witnessed a surging tendency that more students choose to receiveoverseas education, especially higher education. Those proponents of thisaction claim it not only widens students’ knowledge and horizons but also cultivatestheir independence and personalities as well as benefits their foreignlanguage. For me, this is true in most cases.

Firstof all, studying abroad can cultivate students’ abilities to live independentlyand form their own characters. Students have to deal with many problems whenthey study abroad. They have to learn how to be accustomed to a new environmentand how to get along with the teachers and classmates. During their studies,they can acquire some interpersonal skills.

Also,studying abroad can provide a good language environment for students. Foreignlanguages, especially English, one of the dominant languages in the world, are especiallyfunctional in most job fairs. Of course, well-management of language can removelanguage barrier and easier access to international cooperations whichemphasize on language skills of their employees.

Admittedly,studying abroad also brings about many disadvantages. For example, some studentswho have never experienced the long separation with their parents  may be confronted with some psychologicalproblems, range from loneliness to homesick. Moreover, the tuition fee is veryhigh, which may lay heavy financial burden to the average people. However,these barriers can be removed through varying meanings. Thanks to moderntechniques such as internet and mobile phones, students can keep contact totheir parents whenever and wherever.Students can also relieve their financialburden through scholarship as well as part-time jobs.

To sum up, it is undoubtedthat studying in another country enables those students to be more mature andself-independent as well as gain more language skills. Therefore, if managedwell, this means is definitely a good choice for the students.


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