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2013年10月20日托福写作考试回顾及解析

2013-10-22

来源:苏州环球雅思

小编:朱丁琦 1665
摘要:2013年10月20日托福写作考试回顾及解析--环球教育苏州分校 朱丁琦

  第一套题

  【综合写作】

  讲algae作为fuel来代替一些主要的能源,重复2013年1月12 日托福考试内容

  阅读内容:

  algae可以提取做Fuel,但是缺点有三条。1 种植algae会占用大量的water和land。2 种植和提炼algae要用到的equipment很贵。 3 algae需要在高密度的CO2气体下才生长,为种植algae生产大量CO2会释放到大气中,这污染环境。

  听力内容:

  algae会有一个bright future。1 algae可以在很infertile的土壤中生长,并且对水质不敏感,即使水很脏也可以,所以不会浪费土壤和水。 2 algae生长迅速,几周就可harvest和regrow,和corns这种一年两季的不同,大量的收获会使farmer挣到足够的money,然后可以make up equipment的 cost. 3 众所周知,factory最爱release CO2, 可以选择将algae种植在工厂边上,既诈骗生长,又减少了CO2的污染。

  【独立写作】

  是否同意:Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the internet or listen to the music while doing their homework。

  重复2012年12月8日北美托福独立写作题目

  【思路分析】

  Thesis Statement:不同意该观点

  思路分析: 该题其实是考察在学习时用手机上网听音乐有哪些坏处。建议可以根据不同的对象进行分类讨论

  1. 对于学生自己来说:

  使用手机会分散思维——解题思考的时候思维无法连续——影响自己学习专注度和效果

  2. 对周围同学来说

  使用手机(如游戏)——吸引周围同学注意力——影响其他同学听课或者学习效果

  3. 对老师而言

  使用手机发出声音——影响上课进度和授课效率

  【参考例文】

  Mobile phones, nowadays, are gaining unimaginable popularity in students’ life. Some have argued that playing mobile phones allow students to relax and have a better motion in their study. Others, however, oppose to this idea based on the statement that they indeed distract students' attention and will lower the academic performance. Although the former viewpoint may be reasonable, I assume that it is definitely harmful to students' studies.

  Admittedly, mobile phones do enable students to improve their studies in varying aspects. The most obvious function of a mobile phone is to provide plenty and useful information for students to absorb. For example, those students who face difficulties but fail to find a teacher could surf on the Internet easier by cell phones. What they need to do is only to press the button and Google the related key words and get the answers whenever and wherever. Moreover, listening music via mobile phones is an efficient way to release stress for students because they have been studying all day long, and thus have no spare time to relax themselves despite listening to music. At the same time, assignments have increasingly burdened on their shoulders. Music, in this sense, can entertain themselves as to refresh their mind. As a result, in the process of learning with mobile phones can benefit students for such practical advantages.

  However, few students can handle a successful academic study accompanied by cell phones. The most apparent and key point is that mobile phones always extract them from studies. As most young people are less likely to manage their life disciplined for lack of self control, some of them spend most of the time chatting on the Internet, playing games, reading pulp fictions and so on. So precious are the time and energy that they have wasted. Additionally, other students may fail to keep on their studies in such an environment where their classmates are listening music via mobile phones. This certainly would hinder the studying progress of students, especially for those who desire peaceful environment. Furthermore, teachers will be interrupted by the noise form mobile phones. A wealth of cases has been shown in the campus. It is rare to see students do not play mobile phone while the professor in front is trying to explain a theory carefully. All the hard working from the professors have been wasted. Consequently, all of these disadvantages are definitely negative ways of learning.

  To sum up, despite the benefits brought out by cell phones, they do more harms than goods. There is no doubt that students are distracted from mobile phones, since they do not own the ability of self-control, and their behavior also draw classmates attention and the teacher will be affected in an negative way.

  第二套题

  【综合写作】

  对于Amazon 在1492年是否有大量人口居住的讨论

  阅读内容:认为人没有办法居住在Amazon

  1. 雨林土壤有酸性物质对植物有毒,没有办法种植植物

  2. 没有各种建筑物痕迹

  3. 在盆地中没有大量哺乳动物为人们提供蛋白质

  听力内容:反驳阅读中的内容

  1. 有特定区域有肥沃的土壤,且当地人将灰洒在土壤上,使土地酸性减弱,可以种植植物

  2. 当时的建筑物主要是用木头建筑的,所以被雨水分解了;后期研究人员又发现支撑复杂社会活动的遗迹

  3. 雨林中有一种独特的植物可以为人类提供足够的蛋白质,因此不需要哺乳动物也可以存活下来

  【独立写作】

  是否同意:Do you prefer to purchase at the large store everything you want or the small store which specialized in certain product?

  Thesis Statement:在大商店买东西更好

  思路分析: 该题重点在比较大商场东西多与小商店有特色产品这两项,因此建议主体段添加让步段,针对小商店有特色这一信息

  Introduction:

  背景信息 an increasing amount of people do shopping 加上引出关于购物地点的话题

  Body:

  1.大商店买东西可以节省时间和精力,提高效率

  2.大商店不仅提供商品也提供一些综合性服务,使人们生活丰富

  3. 虽然小商店可以买到一些特色产品,但是对于日常生活来说并不实用。因此还是大商店比较好

  Conclusion:

  重述观点信息,强调大商场购物带来的好处

  【参考例文】

  Recent decades have witnessed a surging progression of living standard based on efficient public transportation, high-tech internet, and especially the advanced integrated shopping centers and so forth. Those who are in favor of shopping may advocate that these large shops bring great benefits to the public due to the convenience while those who are opposed to it claim that the small stores which specialized in certain products are better. Personally speaking, I stand by the former statement.

  First of all, it is more convenient and efficient doing shopping in shopping malls. Consumers can buy everything they want in a shopping mall. This means that they only need to have one driving or taking one bus to the destination and buy the living necessities, including food, clothes, shoes and even cosmetics, which are enough for one week or even longer. They do not do many shopping and this actually saves time. On the other hand, shopping in small shops takes tremendous amount of time since the shoppers need to drive to divergent places to buy different items.

  Moreover, a big shop enables people to live colorful. Most large stores provide food court or showing zone for their customers. So when the customers get tired of shopping, they can easily buy food or snacks for refreshment. For example, when I feel very tired, I can buy a cup of coffee, enjoying music in a coffee house. In addition, the display zone entertains the customers via dress shows. My personal experience proves that. On weekend, I can stroll in the shopping mall with some friends, observing some popular styles of clothes and shoes, and try some clothes to see whether they really match me. This also allows me to keep in fashion. Of course, this cannot be achieved by small stores.

  Admittedly, small stores with special items mean that unique products can be purchased through the store. This provides a sense of enjoyment for the shoppers due to the feeling of specialty. Moreover, those gifted craftsmen could make money and even get fame from such stores. However, the products in the stores are normally high-priced and not suiting the public.

  In conclusion, considering the types, time and entertainment of shopping, a large store with multiple products is more favorable.


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