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2013年12月7日托福写作考试分析

2013-12-11

来源:苏州环球雅思

小编:陆婧 535
摘要:2013年12月7日托福写作考试分析--苏州环球教育学校 陆婧

Integrated Writing

话题:Americanmountain range形成的三个理论:

1. hotspot

2. collision

3. ice

听力观点【反驳阅读】

1. hotspot找不到很近的volcano,最近的一个也在5500km

2. 山脉的peaksharp,很tall不可能是collision的时候形成的,因为经过了太远的时间,不可能顶风还是这么tall

3. valley was shaped by running river, ice不符合


Independent Writing

Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement?

Government should give more money insupport arts than that of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.

【考题内容】你是否同意一下观点?政府应该花更多的钱来支持艺术而不是运动员,比如由国家支持的奥林匹克队

【题型分析】利弊分析题。该题属于较老考题,重复2008.05.10

【谋篇布局】

Para1: Introduction.(背景引入,真论点引入话题,摆明立场)

这道题目的本质其实就是比较艺术和运动员的重要性。对于大多数同学来说肯定是体育运动,也就是athletic这一块相对更加的熟悉,展开的更多。所以我们选择政府应该更支持体育。

Para2: Body Paragraph 1(分论点,解释,举例)

支持运动员可以提倡全民健身,提高人民的身体素质。Supporting athletics such as an Olympicteam can stimulate people exercise and keep health. By watching a sport game,people will be more interested in doing exercise just like those athletics whothey like.

Para3: Body Paragraph 2(分论点,解释,举例)

支持体育运动可以促进经济的发展。Supporting athletics such as an Olympicteam can push sport's development forward which can also stimulate economic. 举例Beijing's development can prove thisview. During the Olympic Games, Beijing has developed not only intransportation but also in environment protection. A game can change a city insuch a short time which impressed us a lot. In the contrast, supporting thearts certainly cannot achieve.

Para4: Body Paragraph 3(分论点,解释,举例)

  支持体育运动可以给大众提供娱乐。Supporting athletics gives our citizenmore entertainment than arts. In this day and age, more and more people spendtime on watching sport games. For everyone can easily understand a supportgame, but have difficulties in understand art. Government might spend moneysupporting the arts without obvious effects. However, sports have muchdifferences from arts that government's spend would not waste.

Para5: Conclusion(总结论点)

综上所述,政府应该花更多的资金在运动员或者奥林匹克运动团队上,这样可以使人民的生活更加的风度多彩,身体也更健康,同时也可以给国家带来更多的收入。


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