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小编:夏明洋 1382Task 1
The tabledescribes the changes of people who went for international travel in1990, 1995,2000 and 2005. (million)
本次小作文是以表格的形式呈现动态图,难度一般。
Key features:
1)国际旅游总数呈上升趋势,从448.9 增至693.7
2)欧洲人出国旅游人数5年内保持最多,从280增至400.2
3)中东地区出国人数5年内最低(the most reluctant), 也仅仅从9.8稍稍增至15.8;非洲也相对保守,从18.2 稍稍增至28.
4)1995年后,亚洲太平洋地区出国游人数增长率最高,从60.2增至135.8
5)美国国际旅游率相对较高,从1990年的80.5增至2000年的118.2。 然后从2000年开始,人数将至5年后的113.2,是唯一一个下降的国家。
参考开头:
The table illustrates how the number of peopletraveling abroad changed in every 5 years between 1990 and 2005.
参考结尾:
Overall, the European had the greatestinterest of visiting abroad while most Middle East people choose to stay attheir own country. There seemed to be a increasingly big oversea travelingmarket in Asia and Pacific area. And the total national traveling number saw apositive trend.
Task 2
Somepeople think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area intowns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree?
分析: 本次考试为extend agree题, bothsides 相对隐蔽一些,但是也非常好找。
One side: planting more trees in towns andcities wights a lot
The other side: constructing more housingsometimes is quite necessary.
首段: 现象+ 观点引入。
The layout of a town or city plays anessential role on its development. Recently there is a fierce argument aboutthe importance of planting more trees and constructing more houses. Somepersist that creating more green space in the city is the priority.
第二段: one side:
People support this side hold persuasivepoints. Air pollution is no doubt a big social problem in this era in term ofcity construction. Planting more trees can be an efficient method of releasingthe concern. More trees in the parks or gardens enhances a good air cyclingsystem, enabling more fresh airs and less air pollutants. The Hot Islandphenomenon, explained as the extremely hot temperature in a city in the summer,is another problem that can be well resolved by greening the city with moretrees. More surprisingly, beautiful green space is even now applied as a way ofcuring mental and physical illness for city residents.
第三段:the other side:
Nevertheless, the necessity of constructinghouses can never be ignored. Housing construction builds neighborhood,providing better living conditions for the local residents. As the citypopulation increasingly grows, there is a continuous demand for living rooms.The advancement of the city also calls for more rooms for working, entertainingand other purposes. One of the reasons why New York or Shanghai is call asmetropolitan city is because of its number of skyscrapers.
尾段:点名观点(position)
Personally, to realize a sustainabledevelopment and healthy city life, planing more trees and creating more greenspace should exactly become the cynosure of government and citizens. Yet morehousings is also necessary to give moreliving and activity space. City development should appropriately combines thetwo aspects together.
By Matt Xia