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3月28日雅思写作机经

2015-04-01

来源:苏州环球雅思

小编:姚雪 1056
摘要:这次考试的小作文是柱状静态图,四个图分别描绘出四个欧洲国家工业部门员工的工作时长。考生们在写这篇作文是要注意时间是2002,所以应该选用一般过去时,在构思内容时有条理的体现四个国家的数据,可以进行适当比较。

Task 1
The bar chart describes the working hours(per week) of people in industrialsector in four European countries( France, Denmark, Sweden, UK) in 2002.


这次考试的小作文是柱状静态图,四个图分别描绘出四个欧洲国家工业部门员工的工作时长。考生们在写这篇作文是要注意时间是2002,所以应该选用一般过去时,在构思内容时有条理的体现四个国家的数据,可以进行适当比较。

Task 2

Some people think that the increasing use of conputersand mobile phone for communication has had a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills.Do you agree or disagree?
题型类别:讨论类
题材类别:科技类
类似旧题:
10.09.04

Mobilephones have made life easier: anyone can use a mobile phone to answer/make workcalls or home calls at any place 7 days a week. Do you think this developmenthas more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and society?

12.08.09

Mobilecellphones andthe internet play an important part in the way which people relate to oneanother socially. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

09.08.08

Thedevelopment of technology changes the way people connect with each other. Inwhich way does the development of technology change the types of relationshipsamong people? Does it have positive or negative effects on the relationships?

审题:

今次的大作文是老题的修改,考生们需要注意的是,题目考察的是电脑手机的使用增加对于writing readingskills的影响,而不是单纯介绍电脑手机的利弊。

开头段:

背景介绍

The past decade has witnessed a growing tendency ofthe usage of conputers and mobile phone for communication among the youngergeneration, which has arisen considerable concern. Some come to piont it outthat this tendency could diminish young people’s reading and writing skills whileothers dissent.

表达观点:

Personally, I contend the former view.

中间段:

For the most obvious reason, young adults are lesswilling to handwrite or read printing books, instead, they choose to typewriteand scan e-books. However, this may add the chanch of making grammatical andspelling errors unconsciously due to the frequent use of improper abbreviationsand punctuation on mobile phone devices.

Additionally, word processors on conputer areconstantly advancing their functions. Not only can they recognise the mistakes,but they are able to correct them automatically. Such functions set users freefrom reviewing what they have written, thus prevent them from improving.

What is more worrying is that cyber may graduallydeprive the motivation and necessity of acqiuring basic academic abilities. Onenotceable evidence that peole can download approximately any information onlineimplies that there is less requirement for originality. Compared with the ordergeneration, our innovation density and reading volume have inevitably shrinked.

结尾段:

There is no denying that the twenty-first centurydigital products are of great value to interaction. Nevertheless, it can notoutweighh the drawbacks they have brought on literacy, especially when it comesto youngsters. In the long term run, it may negatively affect adolenscents’academic performance.


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