来源:苏州环球雅思
小编:袁瑶 772小作文:柱状图
题目:The number ofmagazines sold per person in 5 countries in 2000,2010 and with the projectionof 2020
图形:柱状图
题型:动静结合(有预测时间)
分析:本次考试仍旧是常规数据图形,描述对象有5个,时间有3个,可以按照动静结合的方法来写。
核心语言点:动态变化趋势+静态排名对比
分段:动态段+静态段
内容:动态段:把A,B,C,D,E5个国家中销售量都上升的一起描述,下降的一起描述(注意2020年的预测时间)
静态段:把5个国家中数据都一样大的放一起对比,数据都一样小的放一起对比
大作文:As well asmaking money, businesse should also have social responsibilities. Do you agreeor disagree?
题型:观点类
题材:社会类
审题分析:key words: makemoney, also,socialresponsibilities
观点分析:agree:同意在赚钱的时候同时兼顾有社会责任感
Disagree:不同意赚钱的同时还要顾及社会责任感
Idea构思:agree:社会责任体现在,1.公司可以为社会带来 jobopportunities
2.可以为国家贡献taxrevenue
3.同时也体现在environmentprotection
Disagree:公司只需要赚钱,不需要兼顾社会责任,因为
1. 公司应该以improveindustrial production 为首要目的
反驳:不得不承认的是,提高产业生产力的确是公司的首要目的,但是一个公司发展的好坏的判断标准不仅仅只是production,更有是否environmentalfriendly等等作为依据
Introduction:
Background: whether socialresponsibility should be connected with creating fortune is essential under such a new socialcondition and has caused wide concern.
Paraphrase:转述原题,题目改写就可
Opinion: 同意
Body:
First reason foragreement: idea:have the awareness of making contributions to a nation for itseconomy like improve tax revenue.
Evidence:因果链拓展,详细说明两者的内在因果联系。
Second reasonfor agreement:idea: should protect environment while making money throughdiverse approaches.
Evidence:事件列举,或者反面论证都可以,举一个公司以牺牲环境来赚取profit的反例。
Contradiction:idea:putpriority on improving industrial production.
Admittedly……
However, the criteria for judginga company is not only the production but also including factors likeenvironmental friendly and so on.
Conclusion:
although makingprofits is vital, shoulder responsibility is also a new conduct that
most businessesshould follow due to the acceptance of sustainable development.