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20193月雅思写作考试权威点评

2019-03-29

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A类小作文

【作文类型】表格图

【作文题目】: The table shows the  medical care in three European countries in the year between 1982 and 2000..

Countries

1982

1990

2000

Physicians

Austria

France

Sweden

18

19

20

23

24

25

32

31

30

Beds in hospital

Austria

France

Sweden

20

19

22

18

20

16

16

23

12

Time length staying in hospital

Austria

France

Sweden

X

12

14

11

9

10

9

8

6

【综合点评】动态表格图。该表格图项目分类和对象较多,需要按照项目进行分类讨论。其次由于是动态,还需结合初始时间点比较和动态变化分析。行文部分注意多使用比较以及变化类短语结构。

A类大作文

【作文题目】Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【题目分析】Discuss类双观点讨论题。 社会类话题本年度本年度第一次出现。该题要求讨论相对的双方观点,对于男女性的社会角色进行讨论。该题需要确定自己的立场,再给出双方观点的原因。

【题材类别】社会类

【参考范文】Gender equality  has always been a frequently discussed topic. People hold divergent standpoints about whether females should participate in political and military occupations or not. In my view, the role of women should be fairly treated.  

There are two main reasons why people believe females are less encouraged in policy or military related jobs. Firstly, women are supposed to engage in mediocre and stable career or even retreat to domesticity according to conventional ideology of a patrilineal society.  In many countries, they are raised and gradually influenced so that a large proportion of women would choose jobs in relation to teaching or media. Secondly, from the psychological aspect, females are relatively more emotional and susceptible so that they might not be suitable for critical positions in a nation, as those jobs usually require decisiveness and a spirit of devotion.  

 

In spite of above arguments, I would agree with the idea that women should fill in the same social roles as men. In fact, it goes against the values of a free and fair society to discourage females from getting involved in identical fields like males. Doing this can only lead to resentment and resistance amongst women who attempt to show their ability in a broader stage. Whats more, women in the contemporary society receive all-rounded and impartial education with regard to moral values and physical fitness. Therefore, it is the stereotype that misleads the ideology of mass and curbs the confidence of female.

In conclusion, albeit reasonable factors in doubting female roles, it seems to that social inclusion should be promoted to welcome justified opportunity in vital positions.


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